Invisible to See
All the sex scenes were not between Drarry, none, and Draco's relationship with Neville and Justin were better explored than his with Harry's, or even why they fell for each other, especially Harry.
It had some really good lines, sarcasm and wit, but I found myself skimming large portions because it was sex scenes between Draco and Justin, and then because nothing was really happening. It had an interesting premise, and some good ideas that frankly I think needed a better writer to reel it in and make it work.
As it is, it's quite passable, aside from the first chapters with all the funny lines. After that one can jump to the last chapter and not miss anything. Which is a pity.
It had some really good lines, sarcasm and wit, but I found myself skimming large portions because it was sex scenes between Draco and Justin, and then because nothing was really happening. It had an interesting premise, and some good ideas that frankly I think needed a better writer to reel it in and make it work.
As it is, it's quite passable, aside from the first chapters with all the funny lines. After that one can jump to the last chapter and not miss anything. Which is a pity.