
Invisible to See

It had some really good lines, sarcasm and wit, but I found myself skimming large portions because it was sex scenes between Draco and Justin, and then because nothing was really happening. It had an interesting premise, and some good ideas that frankly I think needed a better writer to reel it in and make it work.
As it is, it's quite passable, aside from the first chapters with all the funny lines. After that one can jump to the last chapter and not miss anything. Which is a pity.